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The alternative rock genre is not backed up, per the source: "For a band as consistent in the alt-rock realm as Manchester Orchestra, a reinvention like this can be a gamble." The quote only calls the band alt-rock.
PopMatters filed it under both indie and alternative rock, so I used that source for both
[15][14] only the latter should be kept here since [15] is invoked later in the sentence too, plus [14] should only be here rather than earlier as wellKncny11(shoot) 16:31, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
[15][16] the latter should not be here because it's at the end of the sentenceKncny11(shoot) 16:31, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Remove Pixies because the AllMusic source says the one song sound like them is the exception
[17][16] put in numerical order
The town being home of DUNE is not sourced
Removed the DUNE, left in SURF, which is mentioned by the source
Commas should not be inside speech marks for the song titles
"the first four tracks on the album "set a" → "the first four tracks set "a"
"dark theme," the narrative part of the record" → "dark theme", the narrative part of A Black Mile to the Surface" per MOS:QUOTE
""try and do" → ""[t]ry and do" per the original's capitalisation
"want to play."" → "want to play"."
"Marks' vision for the record" → "Marks' vision for the album"
"different rooms of the studio" → "different rooms of the studios"
The acoustic effects part is unsourced
Changed it to "reverberations", per the source.
"Penultimate track "The Parts,"" → "The penultimate track ,"The Parts","
"in the studio's bathtub," → "in a studio's bathtub," per it not being known which studio
"of the album is" → "of A Black Mile to the Surface is
"insignificance of yourself."" → "insignificance of yourself"."
"means that "[w]hen this" → "means: "When this"
"The album's title, "A Black Mile to the Surface," derives" → "The title of the album derives" per the title already being mentioned in this para
Swap this sub-section with critical reception for the correct order
"for the band." → "for Manchester Orchestra."
"It debuted the album at #33 on the main" → "It debuted at number 33 on the US" but this sentence and the others are not backed up by the Billboard ref
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but don't feel afraid to ask me if you are confused about anything! --K. Peake 10:51, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Kncny11: You have missed a number of MOS:QUOTE issues; to be specific, this refers to when a full sentence is not quoted and the punctuation is inside the speech marks, so examples where the end of the sentence is a quote like PopMatters need to be fixed. --K. Peake 19:04, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Kncny11:✓Pass now, congrats to your efforts even after I had to leave a few comments and do some copy editing after your initial response! --K. Peake 20:41, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]